Let me try a different tack. I'll write a short story instead. Stories are robust because they are open to different interpretations. Stories tug first at your heart, then your mind. Stories let you empathise when rationality fails. This is my first short story with the general theme in personal finance.
The Empty House
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This is what he would have wanted.
He sat down in his spartan 3 rm HDB flat and looked at the lonely clock that hung on the wall. In some parts of the wall, the paint had peeled off, revealing the moldy and stained areas.
12:36pm.
In another alternate universe, his wife would be eating chicken rice and drinking a cup of kopi-o with him in a quiet coffeeshop downstairs. His 2 kids, boy age 10 yrs old and his sister, 12, would both be taking a 30 min journey in a feeder bus on their way back home from school. Fun and laughter will transform his 5 rm HDB flat into a home, and that is well worth sacrificing his time and energy to earn the income to support his family.
But in this particular universe, he dreams only about that elusive early retirement and the holy grail of financial independence. He lives below his means and yes, he still cycles 25 min to work to save up on transportation costs. All his life, his only mantra is that his passive income exceeds his expenses. That's his sole reason for living.
12:41pm.
In a few more minutes, he will be going downstairs to buy his $2 50 lunch. Alone. The uncle behind the economic rice stall knows his favourite dishes; he always order the same repertoire of salted fish fried with bean sprouts and the spongy, orangy tao kua, together with a small heap of rice swimming in a watery, spicy gravy of Chinese styled chicken curry. No drinks. That will burst his daily budget of $10 per day for food. His life is nothing without discipline, frugality and prudence.
During the quieter moments of the day, he will sometimes think that his life is indeed nothing. But this thought only last a fraction of a second and the idea has no chance to take root. He will brush it off immediately. This is what he would have wanted.
It must be what he had wanted.
18 comments :
A really nice change! What is wealth without loved ones to share with.. What is financial freedom when you're trapped in other ways...Well done and I look forward to more stories.
LP,
I raise my glass to you!
We definitely need more story-tellers; less bean-counters ;)
Cheers from the grasshopper.
Back to Rediffusion days?
LOL!
Hi anonymous,
Thanks for your encouragement :) I'll write more in the future :)
Hi SMOL,
Haha, I'm just following behind your footsteps, you master story teller!
Hi bro8888,
We can even go back further in time, where oral traditions is the only way to pass knowledge from one generation to another ;)
How refreshing, CPF should approach you to write stories similar to these with regards to their Minimum Sum and other matters! Good stuff, I like.
Hi LP
Refreshing story indeed.
An empty house a fulfilled dream.
That makes a difference to what it is all about.
Hi LP,
Is this based on a true life story? :P
Keep it up!
Indeed very refreshing...
Which is better? Happily poor or sadly rich? hehe
Guess it is facts tell stories sell :)
Hi marinabay avillion,
Haha, I'm already contributing articles to their IM$avy site.. so it's up to them to see if they want to publish it or not. These days, I'm too lazy to email them to ask them to publish :)
Thanks for the encouragement!
Hi B,
Stories can show you what facts cannot. I'll hone by story telling skills by doing more of it :)
Hi Derek,
Good question! Yes and no :) I don't really know such a person, but if I can imagine it, there really must be such a person around. It's based on observations of real life that I see around me :)
Thanks!
Hi Richard,
Ah ha, the truth is, we can do both :) It's never a dichotomy in real life :)
Hi Adarina Robin Foo,
Considering that I've so many new people who commented on this post, I guess it does indeed sell lol
Perhaps this is the best way to reach out to a wider audience who are never really interested in personal finance. By appealing to them, maybe I can do a little bit more to society than just sticking to numbers and facts.
Social experiment at work ;)
HI LP,
I love it! I will try it next time even with company analysis... LOL
Hi sillyinvestor,
Haha, I would love to see you try!
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